Monday, June 13, 2011

Web Design 2 - The Loaf ( My Version )

THE LOAF (The Original Website)


HOME
STORY

CONTACT

LOCATIONS

To be continue.....

7 comments:

  1. Its nice, neat & tidy. The color just nice to my eyes. But do you want to use "most sellable" instead of "hottest food" ?
    Keep it up, Jean !

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  2. The color of the background blends with the wording very well. But i feel that reservations and opening hours should be insert into the Contact US page instead of home page.

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  3. overall it is nice. i like the color and the template. may be u can make the color brighter a bit because that color is a bit dull...and u got facebook, twitter and blogspot logo on ur right hand side right..may be that one u use back their own color..like facebook logo is blue color so that people will know they can share in facebook. if not may be ppl will think that logo is not facebook because of the color is different. the location page is fine...the contact us that page the font size for name, phone number all mayb can make it bigger a bit?? haha...coz for me..is a bit small la..same goes to the history page and THIS MONTH page..the font size is a bit small for me...haha...yea..that's all...haha...btw...i love ur web page...i did web page before....but damn ugly...haha....

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  4. Like wht Irene say, the colour is a lil dull.. try to google search which colour will be nice hehe=D

    Think the contact us part-box is a lil too big.. just decrease the size a lil shud be alright. There's some grammatical error a lil there as well. So try to check it out..

    I think u shud place the reservation and location at contact us page.. Idk. LOL.. and the homepage can display more on promotion and pricing kua? Can add some pic as well

    Actually I'm not so familiar with web pages all.. so IM noob aha.. So this is all I can help.. But u did a good job. It's kinda decent and nice to view so yeah graz!=D

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  5. I like how you changed it to brown instead of blue; the brown theme makes it more "bakery shop" and "yummier". And I like the similar font that you used to. Anyway, I feel that the top section is nice; nothing to change. And the layout is great too.

    The only thing that I would want to point out for improvement is probably colour contrast. I feel that the contrast is lacking between background and the info boxes; it'll be better it the background colour can be lightened.

    Other than that, no comment! Good job! I definitely find the redesigned website more tempting than the original blue-ey one! =D

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  6. I would say that it is better than the original design because of the design. Maybe it is just personal preference but the website give a feel that it is done very professionally.

    The location page is much better than the original website because of the background and colour chosen which is more user friendly.

    Overall, this design is great. Keep up the good work.

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  7. I like how you placed the navigation on top and the contents below it. Makes it really easy to browse around. The colour of the layout is warm and bread-like which is good. About the arrangement of the 'home, menu, locations etc' links, I felt that 'locations' should be placed beside 'press' or 'contact us', so that it would seem more in order. I notice the sides of the screen are a little empty, perhaps you could fill it up?

    I loved reading the history of the bakery, seems like a great way to promote the bakery's success, and the cute 'find a location near you' tab just seems really convenient.

    I must say you this is a very well designed layout.

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